life poem today we did life poems here is my
my name is PJ and welcome to my amazing world
I can see my nephews and nieces eating a hot summer day
i can feel the blazing heat blasting on my body
I dream about having a good and peaceful life
I hear screaming from my nephews and nieces every single day
Kia ora and thanks for listening to my amazing world
it was pretty easy do you like poems?
HI pj it Lochlan i enjoyed your summer poem. But even i am in your class I can not wait for the finished poem. I would of like to see more words so I would get to read a little more. Thank Pj and blog you later
Kia ora PJ, Kedjron her I really enjoyed your blog post of your life poem, it was really entertaining and good to read. I enjoy making poems, to me I think poems are fun to make, maybe next time you could work on your capital letters, other than that keep up the good work buddy.